This after only 18 months. How differently the Japanese look at Shodan. After years and years of training, usually starting as a youthyou are finally promoted to Shodan. You are no more than a beginner.
KWhipkey 4 Comments Fight scenes. Whether live action or written, they can be such a pain to pull off, falling all too easily into the realm of cheesy.
Recently, I sent a frustrated plea to the Twitterverse, begging authors to do their research before including the martial arts in their fights. As both a martial artist and a writer, I have insight that could help authors overcome the hurdle of fight scenes.
The attacker stumbled backwards, grasping at his bleeding nose. He had the upper-hand. He advanced toward his opponent, his hands raised to guard his face, his body relaxed into a sparring stance.
The attacker glared up at him, straightening into a matching stance. Charlie stumbled forward, turning to face his attacker before he was struck again and instantly ducked the knife hand strike aimed at his head. The man blocked most, but a few landed, knocking the attacker from his feet.
Charlie stood over him for a split second before finishing him off with a well-placed axe kick to the sternum. As the attacker rolled on the ground, sputtering, Charlie ran for the safety of a nearby cafe.
Some of you may even think this is an alright fight scene, aside from the obvious grammatical flaws that could be fixed with a few more drafts.
But this is the example of what not to do, remember? Did you notice that I gave you very little about why this fight is happening, or where? A laundry list of steps you could re-enact, but that you feel not at all. But it has no lasting impact on you, does it? This scene is about as forgettable as they come.
Who out there noticed the completely implausible choreography I threw in? You get a cookie. Those who have done a round kick know that while performing it, you balance on one leg, your body positioned so that your center of gravity is entirely over that back leg.
If you read it closely, you realized the attacker is standing still. His mind screamed at him, desperate to know why it was being punished.
His lungs burned, his mouth working like a fish on dry land, sucking in nothing but fear. Panic flooded his veins with adrenaline.
He struggled, clawing at the fingers sealed around his throat. He tried to kick Eric in the groin but only managed to connect with his shin, the impact ricocheting painfully through his foot.
Eric snarled, loosening his hold, giving Charlie the opening he needed.
Eric stumbled backward, grasping at his bleeding nose. Eric glared up at him, straightening into a matching stance. It was just like old times, only now there was no one to referee the match, to stop it before it went too far.
All this for a girl. Charlie knew it was ridiculous, that he should walk away, but fury mixed with adrenaline, coursing through him like a pulsing heat.Writing About Fighting.
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Having said that, I’d like to think I can write a decent fight scene. 😉.